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Monday, November 17, 2014
Closer or Farther???
Would you rather have the world end by getting a little closer to the sun each day
or
have the world end by getting a little farther from the sun each day?
I would rather have the world end by getting a little bit farther tom the sun. I would peter that because I like cold better then hot. If you are hot you really can't get naked. Even if you do once all your clothes are off you can't take anything els off. But if your cold you can layer up. Even if you have 1000 layers on you can still manage to layer. I thing If we get closer to the sun each day we would die faster. But if we get farther from the sun we will probably die in a longer peiord of time. I don't want to die. I also don't think most people will want to die rather. People can last in the cold for a longer time than the heat. Or at least I would. That is why I think it is better to get farther from the sun each day. Courtney the awesome (: (:
I would rather have the Earth end by moving further to the Sun because I like cold weathers. And I don't really like hot days because i hate sweating and if we move closer we'll just crash into the sun but moving farther is jut going to get colder! I think people would live longer if it's really cold than sweating like a pig! If u just get cold i think you should just put layers! Other thing is if you get really hot you don't get naked so you don't have anything to wear if you get super hot. If we get closer to the sun we will just die faster! But if u move back farther it's pretty fine! That's why moving back is better! ~Frances<3
I would rather have world getting end a little bit further. Then you would burn.If the sun would get further you wouldn't get burned. Then we can still survive longer. If the sun got really close it would be really hot. So the sun got back will not roasted.
I would rather move farther away from the sun and die or will I? If we move farther away we will just be stuck in suspendade animation and we will never age. Until we find another heat source or run into something. Another reason is if you get closer to the sun you can feel the pain and burn of it. When geting further away you dont feel it. So i would rather get further away then closer. Ryan 10
I would rather die by getting a little farther from the sun because you will not be burned by the sun. And in my opinion you would get to live longer because the sun is not getting closer and if it were to it can make up die. Also if you are on the earth and you are moving farther from the sun you will hopefully be remembered so that it does not scare you. If you would get closer to the sun you will die and feel the horrible pain and not even say goodbye to your family. You probably cant breath by getting closer to the sun. I would rather have us float off into the Solar System than die suddenly. But will we die even if we float of into space?! Tatum Vigilante #19
I would rather die by getting farther from the sun than getting closer to the sun. I would like to die getting farther away than getting closer to the sun because I like it cold better than hot outside. I would do that because I do not want to burn to death. I would rather freeze to death. I would do that because I wouldn't want to die at 10 years old. That would be cool but not cool at the same time because I wouldn't want to be burned to death.
I would rather the world end by the world getting a little farther to the Sun. I would rather it go farther because I like it colder than warmer. I would also rather the world end by going farther to the Sun ,because global warming would not happen. I would also rather the world end by going farther because there would probably be snow. I would rather the world end by not going closer to the Sun because more masquitos would come. I would also rather the world end by not going closer to the Sun because global warming might happen.
I would rather the world the world end by getting farther from the sun. I choose this because I love being cold. I would not want to be burned up by the sun though. If you are cold, you can just visit a warm place and bundle up. I think it would take longer to go farther away from the sun then closer. Plus, babies look really cute all bundled up. Snow would be fun to have all over the country too. People would know when you will get to hot you die so it would be scary to know which date. Eventually, you would run into the sun as well. Emily #5
I would rather move farther away from the sun than closer to it. If i were to move closer and closer to the sun every day than in a few week it would be up to 900 degrees fahrenheit. Also the Sun would crash into the Earth. If we moved away from the sun the temperature would drop down because we wouldn't have the heat from the sun but we would get snow days every day which would be awesome! Also everyone would get used to the cold.This is why it would be better to move away from the sun rather than move closer.#6
I would want the world end getting farther from the sun. That is so because if we got closer we would all die quicker. I like to be cold. We could play dodge rock with the asteroid belt! There will be snow every where witch means no school! That is why should get farther.
I would rather move farther away from the Sun than getting closer for the end. I would choose this because if we were getting closer you walk out side and its 9000 degrees fahrenheit and you can't protect yourself from that. If you were to be getting away from the Sun and it's getting colder and you can protect yourself from that and in the future people could make passage ways with heating inside so we don't get so cold. Plus cold would be really fun to because you can just stay inside and sit by a fire eating marshmallows. This could be really fun then being burnt alive at 10,000 degrees. This is why I'd rather choose to go away from the Sun. #15 Mason
I would rather have the world end by getting a little closer to the sun each day than have the world end by getting a little farther from the sun each day. First, I would rather have Earth get hotter than colder, because I don't have that many jackets. Second, if we kept getting closer to the Sun, Earth would eventually be the first planet from the Sun! That's pretty cool! Finally, whichever way the world ends, we can always move to Mars! That is why I would rather have the world end by getting a little closer to the sun each day than have the world end by getting a little farther from the sun each day. Lily #12
I would rather have the world end by getting farther from the sun each day. There is a better chance of survival it would be freezing but we could just buy a hot tub and live in it. I would also play dodge rock with Christian on the astroid belt. Sense Arizona never snows we would finally have snow and go snowboarding and sledding. But we might hit other planets and earth would be destroyed but we could just live on those planets. That is why I chose to get farther from the sun. Sam McIntosh
If I wanted to be closer or farther I would chose closer. The reason why is because if I wanted it to be farther I would be freezing unless you were used to the cold but I am not used to the cold at all so I just want to get closer to the Sun that be farther from the Sun. I think I want to be closer because I would rather be hot than be cold because if I was in the cold I wouldn't have very much pairs of pants to wear for the coldness of the air. I would have enough shorts for the heat in the air though!That is why I think that I want to be closer to the Sun than be farther than the Sun. <3 Tatianna Booth #4 <3
I would rather do both. One reason is because I don't want to be to hot or to cold. Another reason is because I like being in the middle of every thing. Another reason is because if I was in the middle I would be able to see other planets and the asteroid belt. so thats is why I would rather be in the middle than closer or farther.Nico Jorge #11 prestons class. Grade 5
I would want to get closer to the sun. The reason is the nights would be nice out out than freezing cold.Also I could go out to play lacrosse with my dad.I don't want it to be so cold then I would have to wait until Summer. the good part it won't so hot. that is why I want the sun to get closer at the end of the day Jt Scannell #17
I would want to get farther to the sun every day.One reason is if we got closer every day you would blow up when we hit the earth. Another thing that would probably squish us because of the suns gravity. I would rather be cold than hot because you would get hotter and hotter every day and would probably burn to death. My last reason is that you have more warm stuff like jackets and sweaters but when you get closer you would have to take your shirt off and you can not take your body off. cooper wrzosek.
I would rather do neither, I would want it to stay the same temperature. Why I would want it to stay the the same is because I don't like to be to hot or to cold. I prefer to stay at the perfect temperature, which to me is 75 degrees! I like to wear shorts, flip flops and a t shirt, no coats, gloves or hats!!! The perfect temperature is great for me because I like to go outside and play all the time. This is why I cannot choose between closer or farther from the sun.
I would rather have the world end by getting a little bit farther tom the sun. I would peter that because I like cold better then hot. If you are hot you really can't get naked. Even if you do once all your clothes are off you can't take anything els off. But if your cold you can layer up. Even if you have 1000 layers on you can still manage to layer.
ReplyDeleteI thing If we get closer to the sun each day we would die faster. But if we get farther from the sun we will probably die in a longer peiord of time. I don't want to die. I also don't think most people will want to die rather. People can last in the cold for a longer time than the heat. Or at least I would. That is why I think it is better to get farther from the sun each day. Courtney the awesome (: (:
I would rather have the Earth end by moving further to the Sun because I like cold weathers. And I don't really like hot days because i hate sweating and if we move closer we'll just crash into the sun but moving farther is jut going to get colder! I think people would live longer if it's really cold than sweating like a pig! If u just get cold i think you should just put layers! Other thing is if you get really hot you don't get naked so you don't have anything to wear if you get super hot. If we get closer to the sun we will just die faster! But if u move back farther it's pretty fine! That's why moving back is better! ~Frances<3
ReplyDeleteI would rather have world getting end a little bit further. Then you would burn.If the sun would get further you wouldn't get burned. Then we can still survive longer. If the sun got really close it would be really hot. So the sun got back will not roasted.
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DeleteI would rather move farther away from the sun and die or will I? If we move farther away we will just be stuck in suspendade animation and we will never age. Until we find another heat source or run into something. Another reason is if you get closer to the sun you can feel the pain and burn of it. When geting further away you dont feel it. So i would rather get further away then closer. Ryan 10
ReplyDeleteI would rather die by getting a little farther from the sun because you will not be burned by the sun. And in my opinion you would get to live longer because the sun is not getting closer and if it were to it can make up die. Also if you are on the earth and you are moving farther from the sun you will hopefully be remembered so that it does not scare you. If you would get closer to the sun you will die and feel the horrible pain and not even say goodbye to your family. You probably cant breath by getting closer to the sun. I would rather have us float off into the Solar System than die suddenly. But will we die even if we float of into space?! Tatum Vigilante #19
ReplyDeleteI would rather die by getting farther from the sun than getting closer to the sun. I would like to die getting farther away than getting closer to the sun because I like it cold better than hot outside. I would do that because I do not want to burn to death. I would rather freeze to death. I would do that because I wouldn't want to die at 10 years old. That would be cool but not cool at the same time because I wouldn't want to be burned to death.
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I would rather the world end by the world getting a little farther to the Sun. I would rather it go farther because I like it colder than warmer. I would also rather the world end by going farther to the Sun ,because global warming would not happen. I would also rather the world end by going farther because there would probably be snow. I would rather the world end by not going closer to the Sun because more masquitos would come. I would also rather the world end by not going closer to the Sun because global warming might happen.
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I would rather the world the world end by getting farther from the sun. I choose this because I love being cold. I would not want to be burned up by the sun though. If you are cold, you can just visit a warm place and bundle up. I think it would take longer to go farther away from the sun then closer. Plus, babies look really cute all bundled up. Snow would be fun to have all over the country too. People would know when you will get to hot you die so it would be scary to know which date. Eventually, you would run into the sun as well. Emily #5
ReplyDeleteI would rather move farther away from the sun than closer to it. If i were to move closer and closer to the sun every day than in a few week it would be up to 900 degrees fahrenheit. Also the Sun would crash into the Earth. If we moved away from the sun the temperature would drop down because we wouldn't have the heat from the sun but we would get snow days every day which would be awesome! Also everyone would get used to the cold.This is why it would be better to move away from the sun rather than move closer.#6
ReplyDeleteI would want the world end getting farther from the sun. That is so because if we got closer we would all die quicker. I like to be cold. We could play dodge rock with the asteroid belt! There will be snow every where witch means no school! That is why should get farther.
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I would rather move farther away from the Sun than getting closer for the end. I would choose this because if we were getting closer you walk out side and its 9000 degrees fahrenheit and you can't protect yourself from that. If you were to be getting away from the Sun and it's getting colder and you can protect yourself from that and in the future people could make passage ways with heating inside so we don't get so cold. Plus cold would be really fun to because you can just stay inside and sit by a fire eating marshmallows. This could be really fun then being burnt alive at 10,000 degrees. This is why I'd rather choose to go away from the Sun. #15 Mason
ReplyDeleteI would rather have the world end by getting a little closer to the sun each day than have the world end by getting a little farther from the sun each day. First, I would rather have Earth get hotter than colder, because I don't have that many jackets. Second, if we kept getting closer to the Sun, Earth would eventually be the first planet from the Sun! That's pretty cool! Finally, whichever way the world ends, we can always move to Mars! That is why I would rather have the world end by getting a little closer to the sun each day than have the world end by getting a little farther from the sun each day. Lily #12
ReplyDeleteI would rather have the world end by getting farther from the sun each day. There is a better chance of survival it would be freezing but we could just buy a hot tub and live in it. I would also play dodge rock with Christian on the astroid belt. Sense Arizona never snows we would finally have snow and go snowboarding and sledding. But we might hit other planets and earth would be destroyed but we could just live on those planets. That is why I chose to get farther from the sun.
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If I wanted to be closer or farther I would chose closer. The reason why is because if I wanted it to be farther I would be freezing unless you were used to the cold but I am not used to the cold at all so I just want to get closer to the Sun that be farther from the Sun. I think I want to be closer because I would rather be hot than be cold because if I was in the cold I wouldn't have very much pairs of pants to wear for the coldness of the air. I would have enough shorts for the heat in the air though!That is why I think that I want to be closer to the Sun than be farther than the Sun. <3 Tatianna Booth #4 <3
ReplyDeleteI would rather do both. One reason is because I don't want to be to hot or to cold. Another reason is because I like being in the middle of every thing. Another reason is because if I was in the middle I would be able to see other planets and the asteroid belt. so thats is why I would rather be in the middle than closer or farther.Nico Jorge #11 prestons class. Grade 5
ReplyDeleteI would want to get closer to the sun. The reason is the nights would be nice out out than freezing cold.Also I could go out to play lacrosse with my dad.I don't want it to be so cold then I would have to wait until Summer. the good part it won't so hot. that is why I want the sun to get closer at the end of the day Jt Scannell #17
ReplyDeleteI would want to get farther to the sun every day.One reason is if we got closer every day you would blow up when we hit the earth. Another thing that would probably squish us because of the suns gravity. I would rather be cold than hot because you would get hotter and hotter every day and would probably burn to death. My last reason is that you have more warm stuff like jackets and sweaters but when you get closer you would have to take your shirt off and you can not take your body off. cooper wrzosek.
ReplyDeleteI would rather do neither, I would want it to stay the same temperature. Why I would want it to stay the the same is because I don't like to be to hot or to cold. I prefer to stay at the perfect temperature, which to me is 75 degrees! I like to wear shorts, flip flops and a t shirt, no coats, gloves or hats!!! The perfect temperature is great for me because I like to go outside and play all the time. This is why I cannot choose between closer or farther from the sun.
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