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Monday, January 5, 2015
Secret Key or Secret Room????
Would you rather have a secret key that can unlock any door
or
have a secret room that no one can enter except you?
Make sure your response is at least 6 sentences in length and check your spelling and grammar.
I would rather have a secret key that can unlock any room because then I could sneak in to places. I could also open the door the vault at the bank and get all the money (but don't worry I won't)!!!! I would not like a secret room because if I move houses then I couldn't have the secret room anymore. Or if the room was not at a house it was at a different location and I moved in to another state It would be no use!!! But if I had a secret key and other people had a secret room I could enter their secret room with the key. But even if I have the key I might loose it, that is one of the downsides. When I am older and I need to get good grades to get in to a good collage I could use my key to get into the office and change my grades if I have to (but I probably would not need to)!!! It would be super fun to use the key to get in to the school and see what the DEADLY lunch food is made of !!!!! That would be super fun!! Courtney
I would rather have a secret key than a secret room! First of all I could UNLOCK THE DOORS! AND I COULD GO IN AND HIDE SOMEWHERE. And if I could go to a house I would hide and when they come home I would make sounds to freak them out!! Also another good reason secret key is better than secret room is because if anyone locks their door and you want something in there you could unlock it and get it! It would be SUPER FUN going to anyone's room if it's locked!!
I would rather have a secret key. Then you unlock any rooms to find out what is happening. if you wanted to go to the mall but is closed you can use secret key. That would be awesome to do. Then you buy anything and get out of there. It is really good sneaking. So I would choose secret key! AVISHKAR#24!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I would rather have a room that no one can enter. If i could go in a secret room i could make a secret pokemon base. Another reason is that not many people dont really use keys. Another reason is by brother cant come in so i can be by myself. He could still get in if he has another key. That is why i would rather have a secret room. ryan 10#
I would have a room where no one could enter. I would have that because if I had the secret key I would be able to go into any place that is locked, but the security cameras will catch me and I could go to jail. If I had the room I can put all of my toys in there. I would want the room to be 100 W and 100 L and it could hold up to 100 tons of full grown elephants. I would put in a flat screen t.v. That is why I would choose the room.
If I could chose between a secret key or a secret room I would say secret room. I would chose secret room because you can do anything thing you want in it and no one will know about it. Another reson is because you can almost have both because you have a room and a key to make it secret so that is another reson. Also you can decorate any way you want to so your mom and dad cant yell at you. When you mad at someone or something you can go in your room and let out all of your emotions and feeling with no one making fun of you. That is why I would rather have a secret room than a secret key. Tatum Vigilante #19
If I had to decide having a room or a secret key. Hmmmmm. I would have to say having a room. Why I really want to have my own room is because I can have my own room that can be decorated the way I want it and no one in my family will think i'm nuts! I just really like to draw and stuff so if I had my own secret room I can put it on my bedroom wall but since I don't have a secret room I have to share with my 2 annoying brothers and I am not comfortable with sharing a room with 2 boys that annoy me just as much as it is getting hit with a baseball bat. What would be the point in using a key if you can't have a room with it and since you have a secret room, YOUR GOING TO NEED A KEY ANYWAY so what is the point in choosing between a key or a room when you choose room and your going to need a key so you can lock it anyway. So if I would ever choose between a secret room and a key that can unlock any kind of door I want would be bad. It is bad because what if there was someone that was sleeping and you open the door and they think it is a robber what do you think would happen? Yeah getting slapped in the face with a frying pan and I have to tell you now, they do not feel good on your face You would also get into people's privacy with all the unlocking and coming in if there was people and that would not be so much fun in my opinion. Secret keys, the cool thing about them is that they can be designed as a guitar or something or even a pony, dog or cat and with a house, the cool thing about those secret rooms are that you can design them how ever you want like a baseball area or a football practice area gymnastics, dance area! Secret rooms are epic and I really like them, you can do so much with secret rooms and with keys, well um, you can design them and unlock things.... Yeah...... That's it...... Anyway that is why I want a secret room instead of a boring unlocking everything key thingymigober.
I would rather have a secret room than a secret key to open a random doors. The secret room would be terrific because I could live by own rules. My rules would include being as loud as I wanted. I would make youtube videos a shout in them with out being told to quite down.Another reason would be that i have a place to calm me down and be secure in my own privet room. I share a room with my brother and I would like to go away to so I could be alone. I could arrange my secret room to how I want it. I could hang my skateboards on the wall and decorate it how I want it. My secret room could be an open world just for my instead of having to share my space.JT Scannell #17
I would rather have a secret room. I would rather have a secret room because I could do what ever I want and not get in trouble for doing it. Another reason I would rather have a secret room is because I could design it how ever I like. I wouldn't want a secret key because I could lose it and someone could find it and use it for them selves. My second reason I wouldn't want a secret key is because I would not know what door to open it with. Those are my reasons why I want a secret room and why I wouldn't want a secret key that opens any door.
I would rather have a key that could unlock any door. I would be able to sneak into any room without any permission. Plus, I could sneak into the bank and get diamonds and be rich!!!!! The secret room might be in another state and I would never get to go in it. The key could unlock the secret room and other rooms. If there are presents in a closet I could easily see what my presents are. I could see grades for the bad kids too! I also could sneak into school and play with all of Mrs. Preston's dice. Emily #5
I would rather have a secret key. If i had a room that no one could go in than what if i got hurt no one would be there to help me. Also I wouldn't be able to jump on my bed with my friends. Plus I wouldnt be able to show my friends my room because they wouldn't be able to get in. With a secret key i could unlock my sis's room and sneak in. Also I could sneak into apartments and open the door to a room without having to pay. That's why i would choose a key that could unlock any door rather than a secret room no one could get into. #6
I would rather have a secret room because I could only go in it and I could do whatever I want all the time after I do my homework. I also could do everything in there I could have my own mini fridge. If I had soundproof walls I would not need headphones to watch my videos. I could also watch a lot of T.V. and play games in the room. My last reason is that nobody would know were you are and what you are doing. Cooper Wrzosek #21
I would rather have a secret room because the room would probably be hidden or not. It could also have treasures inside or money. It may also hold secrets that nobody had ever found it. It could also be a cool room with a big T.V a nice bed, flooring, dest etc. It can be nice to invite friends over to play in your secret room and have a good time relaxing. That is why I would rather have a secret room than a secret key. Alex #2
I would rather have a secret room than a secret key. First, I would rather have a secret room because it would be my second bedroom, and no one could wake me up if I wanted to sleep in! Second, if I had a secret room, than I could personalize it how ever I wanted to! Could you do that with a secret key? Also, I think a secret key could get you into trouble, because you would be sneaking around all the time and someone would catch you. That is why I would rather have a secret room than a secret key. Lily Kilbridge #12
I would rather have a secret key than a secret room. One reason is that if only you are allowed to enter the secret room you can't have your friends over to come in and hangout because your the only one can enter. Plus if you had a key you can go into already secret places with the key and your friends actually can enter. Another reason is that if I had a secret key I could go into to places to just get a sneak peek because I can open the doors to get to them. Plus you could (if you know where it is) sneak into a movie production theater and see what they're doing and see a little of the movie before they come out and see the actors that play in it. That is a little of a lot of reasons why I would rather have a secret key the a secret room. Mason #15 :D :3
I would rather have a secret key,so I can open any door. I could open a underground mine and go exploring. I could maybe open the door to the White House. I would open the doors for anyone that had lost their key.I could use it to open the door to the fastest car, to enter a car race. Also, it would be cool to open the the doors to an ice cream factory, so i could eat all my favorite flavors. AA1
I would rather have a secret room rather than a secret key. A reason I would rather have a secret room is because I would be able to hide all of my stuff that I dont want anyone to see in there. Another reason is because it would just be cool. Another reason is because I would be able to hide in the secret room. So those are all the reasons why I would rather have a secret room than a secret key .Nico # 11
I would rather have a secret room then a secret key. I would do that because I love secret rooms. I like secret rooms because I can do mostly anything I want to do in there. It would be cool if I had a secret room because I would play darts. I would also play pool. I would love it, it would be so cool.
I would rather have a secret room because I can go there whenever I want and I could put stuff there. I could also sleep in there and watch tv all night. When I play hide and seek I would be impossible to find. I could also use that room when I am tired I could sit there and lay down without noise. I would use that room to play in and I could put a mini fridge in there.Sam McIntosh
I would rather have a secret room instead of a secret key. Why is because I could hide anything I want in that room. Then with that key I wouldn't be able to do much with it only open doors. But with the secret room I could do lots of stuff like hide anything in there. Because with the key you could loose it and that would be the worst thing ever. Then if a bad guy found it he could unlock jail sells and banks that would be bad. Then the worst part about that would be it would be all my fault. So that is why I would rather have a secret room instead of a secret key.
I would rather have a secret key that can unlock any room because then I could sneak in to places. I could also open the door the vault at the bank and get all the money (but don't worry I won't)!!!! I would not like a secret room because if I move houses then I couldn't have the secret room anymore. Or if the room was not at a house it was at a different location and I moved in to another state It would be no use!!! But if I had a secret key and other people had a secret room I could enter their secret room with the key. But even if I have the key I might loose it, that is one of the downsides. When I am older and I need to get good grades to get in to a good collage I could use my key to get into the office and change my grades if I have to (but I probably would not need to)!!! It would be super fun to use the key to get in to the school and see what the DEADLY lunch food is made of !!!!! That would be super fun!! Courtney
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a secret key than a secret room! First of all I could UNLOCK THE DOORS! AND I COULD GO IN AND HIDE SOMEWHERE. And if I could go to a house I would hide and when they come home I would make sounds to freak them out!! Also another good reason secret key is better than secret room is because if anyone locks their door and you want something in there you could unlock it and get it! It would be SUPER FUN going to anyone's room if it's locked!!
ReplyDelete~FRANCES #7
I would rather have a secret key. Then you unlock any rooms to find out what is happening. if you wanted to go to the mall but is closed you can use secret key. That would be awesome to do. Then you buy anything and get out of there. It is really good sneaking. So I would choose secret key! AVISHKAR#24!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a room that no one can enter. If i could go in a secret room i could make a secret pokemon base. Another reason is that not many people dont really use keys. Another reason is by brother cant come in so i can be by myself. He could still get in if he has another key. That is why i would rather have a secret room. ryan 10#
ReplyDeleteI would have a room where no one could enter. I would have that because if I had the secret key I would be able to go into any place that is locked, but the security cameras will catch me and I could go to jail. If I had the room I can put all of my toys in there. I would want the room to be 100 W and 100 L and it could hold up to 100 tons of full grown elephants. I would put in a flat screen t.v. That is why I would choose the room.
ReplyDeleteCHRISTIAN ENWIA
If I could chose between a secret key or a secret room I would say secret room. I would chose secret room because you can do anything thing you want in it and no one will know about it. Another reson is because you can almost have both because you have a room and a key to make it secret so that is another reson. Also you can decorate any way you want to so your mom and dad cant yell at you. When you mad at someone or something you can go in your room and let out all of your emotions and feeling with no one making fun of you. That is why I would rather have a secret room than a secret key. Tatum Vigilante #19
ReplyDeleteIf I had to decide having a room or a secret key. Hmmmmm. I would have to say having a room. Why I really want to have my own room is because I can have my own room that can be decorated the way I want it and no one in my family will think i'm nuts! I just really like to draw and stuff so if I had my own secret room I can put it on my bedroom wall but since I don't have a secret room I have to share with my 2 annoying brothers and I am not comfortable with sharing a room with 2 boys that annoy me just as much as it is getting hit with a baseball bat. What would be the point in using a key if you can't have a room with it and since you have a secret room, YOUR GOING TO NEED A KEY ANYWAY so what is the point in choosing between a key or a room when you choose room and your going to need a key so you can lock it anyway. So if I would ever choose between a secret room and a key that can unlock any kind of door I want would be bad. It is bad because what if there was someone that was sleeping and you open the door and they think it is a robber what do you think would happen? Yeah getting slapped in the face with a frying pan and I have to tell you now, they do not feel good on your face You would also get into people's privacy with all the unlocking and coming in if there was people and that would not be so much fun in my opinion. Secret keys, the cool thing about them is that they can be designed as a guitar or something or even a pony, dog or cat and with a house, the cool thing about those secret rooms are that you can design them how ever you want like a baseball area or a football practice area gymnastics, dance area! Secret rooms are epic and I really like them, you can do so much with secret rooms and with keys, well um, you can design them and unlock things.... Yeah...... That's it...... Anyway that is why I want a secret room instead of a boring unlocking everything key thingymigober.
ReplyDelete:3 Tatianna Booth #4 :3
I would rather have a secret room than a secret key to open a random doors. The secret room would be terrific because I could live by own rules. My rules would include being as loud as I wanted. I would make youtube videos a shout in them with out being told to quite down.Another reason would be that i have a place to calm me down and be secure in my own privet room. I share a room with my brother and I would like to go away to so I could be alone. I could arrange my secret room to how I want it. I could hang my skateboards on the wall and decorate it how I want it. My secret room could be an open world just for my instead of having to share my space.JT Scannell #17
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a secret room. I would rather have a secret room because I could do what ever I want and not get in trouble for doing it. Another reason I would rather have a secret room is because I could design it how ever I like. I wouldn't want a secret key because I could lose it and someone could find it and use it for them selves. My second reason I wouldn't want a secret key is because I would not know what door to open it with. Those are my reasons why I want a secret room and why I wouldn't want a secret key that opens any door.
ReplyDeleteNic Smith #18
I would rather have a key that could unlock any door. I would be able to sneak into any room without any permission. Plus, I could sneak into the bank and get diamonds and be rich!!!!! The secret room might be in another state and I would never get to go in it. The key could unlock the secret room and other rooms. If there are presents in a closet I could easily see what my presents are. I could see grades for the bad kids too! I also could sneak into school and play with all of Mrs. Preston's dice. Emily #5
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a secret key. If i had a room that no one could go in than what if i got hurt no one would be there to help me. Also I wouldn't be able to jump on my bed with my friends. Plus I wouldnt be able to show my friends my room because they wouldn't be able to get in. With a secret key i could unlock my sis's room and sneak in. Also I could sneak into apartments and open the door to a room without having to pay. That's why i would choose a key that could unlock any door rather than a secret room no one could get into. #6
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a secret room because I could only go in it and I could do whatever I want all the time after I do my homework. I also could do everything in there I could have my own mini fridge. If I had soundproof walls I would not need headphones to watch my videos. I could also watch a lot of T.V. and play games in the room. My last reason is that nobody would know were you are and what you are doing. Cooper Wrzosek #21
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a secret room because the room would probably be hidden or not. It could also have treasures inside or money. It may also hold secrets that nobody had ever found it. It could also be a cool room with a big T.V a nice bed, flooring, dest etc. It can be nice to invite friends over to play in your secret room and have a good time relaxing. That is why I would rather have a secret room than a secret key.
ReplyDeleteAlex #2
I would rather have a secret room than a secret key. First, I would rather have a secret room because it would be my second bedroom, and no one could wake me up if I wanted to sleep in! Second, if I had a secret room, than I could personalize it how ever I wanted to! Could you do that with a secret key? Also, I think a secret key could get you into trouble, because you would be sneaking around all the time and someone would catch you. That is why I would rather have a secret room than a secret key.
ReplyDeleteLily Kilbridge #12
I would rather have a secret key than a secret room. One reason is that if only you are allowed to enter the secret room you can't have your friends over to come in and hangout because your the only one can enter. Plus if you had a key you can go into already secret places with the key and your friends actually can enter. Another reason is that if I had a secret key I could go into to places to just get a sneak peek because I can open the doors to get to them. Plus you could (if you know where it is) sneak into a movie production theater and see what they're doing and see a little of the movie before they come out and see the actors that play in it. That is a little of a lot of reasons why I would rather have a secret key the a secret room. Mason #15 :D :3
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a secret key,so I can open any door. I could open a underground mine and go exploring. I could maybe open the door to the White House. I would open the doors for anyone that had lost their key.I could use it to open the door to the fastest car, to enter a car race. Also, it would be cool to open the the doors to an ice cream factory, so i could eat all my favorite flavors. AA1
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a secret room rather than a secret key. A reason I would rather have a secret room is because I would be able to hide all of my stuff that I dont want anyone to see in there. Another reason is because it would just be cool. Another reason is because I would be able to hide in the secret room. So those are all the reasons why I would rather have a secret room than a secret key .Nico # 11
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a secret room then a secret key. I would do that because I love secret rooms. I like secret rooms because I can do mostly anything I want to do in there. It would be cool if I had a secret room because I would play darts. I would also play pool. I would love it, it would be so cool.
ReplyDelete~DYLAN
I would rather have a secret room because I can go there whenever I want and I could put stuff there. I could also sleep in there and watch tv all night. When I play hide and seek I would be impossible to find. I could also use that room when I am tired I could sit there and lay down without noise. I would use that room to play in and I could put a mini fridge in there.Sam McIntosh
ReplyDeleteI would rather have a secret room instead of a secret key. Why is because I could hide anything I want in that room. Then with that key I wouldn't be able to do much with it only open doors. But with the secret room I could do lots of stuff like hide anything in there. Because with the key you could loose it and that would be the worst thing ever. Then if a bad guy found it he could unlock jail sells and banks that would be bad. Then the worst part about that would be it would be all my fault. So that is why I would rather have a secret room instead of a secret key.
ReplyDeleteConnor #9