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Monday, April 20, 2015
Fire or Underwater
Would you rather be able to breathe underwater or be able to breathe fire?
Make sure that you support your answer and that it is at least 6 sentences in length.
I would rather breathe under water then breathe fire. If I was able to breathe under water I would never leave I would just be a fish. when I come up I may forget how to walk. If I breathe fire some bad things will happen such as explodeing buildings. Plus if you could breathe fire you would be being studyed all the time . that is why i rather breathe fire. Ryan hanover
I would be able to breathe underwater. Then if you drown in the ocean you can just go underwater and save yourself. Having fire is pointless. You can explore the deep ocean. When you have any underwater races you can win. So I think underwater is better than fire.AVISHKAR!!!!!!!!!!!
I would rather be able to breath under water than breath fire. One reason is becaause i like to swim. another reason is because it would be cool too be able to swim under water with out coming out. Another reason is because I would be able to swin in the sea for a long time. Another reason is because beinng able to breath under water can be very usefull in some life threatining emergensies. Those are all the reasons why I would rather be able too breath under water. Nico Jorge #11 ;()
I would rather be able to breath fire than breath underwater. One big reason why I would rather breath fire than breath underwater is because I really like fire and sometimes play with it. If I could breath fire whenever I wanted maybe when it's January or February, I could breath fire into my pool to heat it up and swim. Another reason why I would rather breath fire is because I can already stay underwater for a very long time. Plus if I could breath fire, in a dark place I can just breath fire for light. Another reason why I would rather breath fire is because I could use it to defend myself or other people. This are my facts about why I would rather breath fire than breath underwater. ~Mason #15~ :)
I would rather breath underwater than breath fire. A couple of reasons why is that you could explore so much more underwater. Plus breathing fire does you nothing but make you have bad breath. Being able to go underwater without having to go up for air every 20 seconds would be awesome because I would get to see the real beauty of the sea. Breathing fire would hurt because all that flame comes up your throat and it would hurt. Plus in a battle of these two categories underwater would win because whenever they would blow fire I would go into the water, blocking the flame from getting me. This is why I would choose to breath underwater rather than breath fire. Matthew Covely #6
I would rather breath underwater instead of being able to breath fire. If I could breath fire I might accidentally burn someone. I would freak out my mom if I did not come out of the water for air for 15 minutes. She would scream. I would probably swim mostly in my pool because we do not live close to an ocean. I also do not like fish. They are CREAPY! I would also swim in Lake Pleasant. I LOVE the lake! I think being able to breath underwater would make me try new things. I would swim in the ocean deep enough that I could stretch out my legs and not touch fish. I would swim where the water is clear and bright blue! Courtney
I would breathe underwater because it has been my dream. I would hope I could see clearly and talk to fish. I would talk and talk and talk to whale's. I would look for the loch ness monster. I could hold my breath for longer than the world record! I could do a fish fight! HHHHIIIIIIIAAAAAAAH!!!!!! CHRISTIAN ENWIA
I would rather be able to breath under water than breath fire. I would rather do this because in the ocean I would not drown in the waves. I could go down to the ocean floor and meditate. My risk of drowning would not exist if I could breath underwater. I would have an advantage in the swimming games, Marco Polo and Colors. If I could breath under water, I be the best swimmer and qualify for the Olympic games. I would win many gold medals in swimming for the U.S.A. Breathing underwater would be change my life! JT Scannell #17
I would rather breath under water because breathing fire you can hert someone with it and you can be like look i'm a fish under water and I can breath and you can play mermaids. Breathing fire can be boring at some point because all you do is breath hot air. When you can just stay under forever. You can say lets have a breathing contest and trick them and you will win. That is why I would rather breath under water. Tatum Vigilante #19
I would rather be able to breath underwater so when I'm swimming, I can stay as long as I want. Breathing fire is dangerous. It can hurt people really bad which cause us to be trapped in jail. I really like swimming a lot so this is a perfect choice for me! so if I'm drowning I can be able to breath and not die! :) Breathing fire is not as fun. You can be trapped somewhere because of the fire. Your mom can even be set on fire or siblings! Everyone too! So that's why I chose breathing underwater than breathing fire. ~Frances:)
I would rather be able to breath underwater than breathing fire. Why because if I breathed fire I might hurt someone. Then I would go to jail, but the good thing is I would be able to melt the iron bars. Then I would be on the run and I would be the most wanted person in my life. If I could breathe underwater I could build a house underwater. Then I could tame a shark to be my pet. If i just breathed fire it wouldn't be fun. With water breathing I wouldn't be worried about drowning. So that is why I would rather be able to breathe underwater than breathe fire.
I would rather be able to breathe underwater than breathe fire. First, you can't control if you breathe, so you would have to breathe fire all the time. If you breathe water, you can only do that while you're underwater. Second, only a small part of the oceans have been explored. As the only water-breathing human, I wouldn't want to miss out on an opportunity like that! Third, I would get to stay in the pool for as long as I wanted to, no matter how much I would smell like chlorine! Awesome! That is why, I would rather be able to breathe underwater than breathe fire. ~Lily Kilbridge
I would rather swim underwater that blow out fire. One reason is that you could swim with dolphins without having to go up and breath because you mite loose the dolphin. Another reason is that you could play hide in seek in a big pool and nobody will find you if you are underwater. You could also have fun because you could see all sorts of sea creatures. I would like it because it it cool and you could pretend to be a shark and not have to snorkel or breath with air. You could probably live underwater if you really wanted to and you could do everything underwater. That is why I would rather breath underwater than breath fire... :) COOPER WRZOSEK # 21
I would rather breath under water than have fire breath. First imagian you can explore so many things. You can go anywere in the ocean.Also you can go to the bottem and have a house there.This is why i want to breath under water.
I would rather be able to breath underwater because I can be like a mermaid. I can win in holding your breath underwater contest. I could swim underwater for hours. Beathing fire can be dangeruos for people around me. I love to swim so that wuold be perfect. I always wanted to be a mermaid. This will be cool and fun to do. I CAN LIVE UNDERWATER!!!! Julia Russomano #13
I would rather breath fire because its just really awesome. Nobody would mess with me if I needed privacy or doing homework. I would be cool to act like a dragon and breath fire everywhere. It would be so cool to see peoples reactions to me breathing fire at the playground. I could use my fire for good uses for camping like making a camp fire for warmth. Usually if you can breathe fire you can be immune to fire which would be awesome as well. Alex #2
I would rather breathe under water. I would like to swim with the fish. I could find hidden treasure without coming for air. I would get a lot of money from people. I would get so much money from the swimming olympics. Sam McIntosh
I would rather be able to breathe under water. I would rather breathe under water because there is no use for breathing fire. I would also rather breathe under water because I could do lots of things with out drowning. I wouldn't want to breathe fire because there is no use for it. I wouldn't want to breathe fire because I could hit someone with the fire and they would catch on fire. Those are my reasons why I would like to breathe under water and wouldn't want to breathe fire.
I would rather breathe underwater than fire. I would do this because fire could hurt me or someone. Also fire could hurt my throut. I would want to breathe underwater because I could become Shark boy. I would like to be shark boy because I would swim with the sharks.This would be awesome.
I would rather breath under water than have fire breth.One reson is you can be talking and blow fire.Water braething is good so you can explore.You would be famase.Why would you need fire braeth for.This is why i would want to breath under water.AA1
Would you rather be able to breathe underwater or be able to breathe fire?
I would rather breathe under water then breathe fire. If I was able to breathe under water I would never leave I would just be a fish. when I come up I may forget how to walk. If I breathe fire some bad things will happen such as explodeing buildings. Plus if you could breathe fire you would be being studyed all the time . that is why i rather breathe fire. Ryan hanover
ReplyDeleteI would be able to breathe underwater. Then if you drown in the ocean you can just go underwater and save yourself. Having fire is pointless. You can explore the deep ocean. When you have any underwater races you can win. So I think underwater is better than fire.AVISHKAR!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI would rather be able to breath under water than breath fire. One reason is becaause i like to swim. another reason is because it would be cool too be able to swim under water with out coming out. Another reason is because I would be able to swin in the sea for a long time. Another reason is because beinng able to breath under water can be very usefull in some life threatining emergensies. Those are all the reasons why I would rather be able too breath under water. Nico Jorge #11 ;()
ReplyDeleteI would rather be able to breath fire than breath underwater. One big reason why I would rather breath fire than breath underwater is because I really like fire and sometimes play with it. If I could breath fire whenever I wanted maybe when it's January or February, I could breath fire into my pool to heat it up and swim. Another reason why I would rather breath fire is because I can already stay underwater for a very long time. Plus if I could breath fire, in a dark place I can just breath fire for light. Another reason why I would rather breath fire is because I could use it to defend myself or other people. This are my facts about why I would rather breath fire than breath underwater. ~Mason #15~ :)
ReplyDeleteI would rather breath underwater than breath fire. A couple of reasons why is that you could explore so much more underwater. Plus breathing fire does you nothing but make you have bad breath. Being able to go underwater without having to go up for air every 20 seconds would be awesome because I would get to see the real beauty of the sea. Breathing fire would hurt because all that flame comes up your throat and it would hurt. Plus in a battle of these two categories underwater would win because whenever they would blow fire I would go into the water, blocking the flame from getting me. This is why I would choose to breath underwater rather than breath fire. Matthew Covely #6
ReplyDeleteI would rather breath underwater instead of being able to breath fire. If I could breath fire I might accidentally burn someone. I would freak out my mom if I did not come out of the water for air for 15 minutes. She would scream. I would probably swim mostly in my pool because we do not live close to an ocean. I also do not like fish. They are CREAPY! I would also swim in Lake Pleasant. I LOVE the lake! I think being able to breath underwater would make me try new things. I would swim in the ocean deep enough that I could stretch out my legs and not touch fish. I would swim where the water is clear and bright blue!
ReplyDeleteCourtney
I would breathe underwater because it has been my dream. I would hope I could see clearly and talk to fish. I would talk and talk and talk to whale's. I would look for the loch ness monster. I could hold my breath for longer than the world record! I could do a fish fight! HHHHIIIIIIIAAAAAAAH!!!!!! CHRISTIAN ENWIA
ReplyDeleteI would rather be able to breath under water than breath fire. I would rather do this because in the ocean I would not drown in the waves. I could go down to the ocean floor and meditate. My risk of drowning would not exist if I could breath underwater. I would have an advantage in the swimming games, Marco Polo and Colors. If I could breath under water, I be the best swimmer and qualify for the Olympic games. I would win many gold medals in swimming for the U.S.A. Breathing underwater would be change my life! JT Scannell #17
ReplyDeleteI would rather breath under water because breathing fire you can hert someone with it and you can be like look i'm a fish under water and I can breath and you can play mermaids. Breathing fire can be boring at some point because all you do is breath hot air. When you can just stay under forever. You can say lets have a breathing contest and trick them and you will win. That is why I would rather breath under water. Tatum Vigilante #19
ReplyDeleteI would rather be able to breath underwater so when I'm swimming, I can stay as long as I want. Breathing fire is dangerous. It can hurt people really bad which cause us to be trapped in jail. I really like swimming a lot so this is a perfect choice for me! so if I'm drowning I can be able to breath and not die! :) Breathing fire is not as fun. You can be trapped somewhere because of the fire. Your mom can even be set on fire or siblings! Everyone too! So that's why I chose breathing underwater than breathing fire.
ReplyDelete~Frances:)
I would rather be able to breath underwater than breathing fire. Why because if I breathed fire I might hurt someone. Then I would go to jail, but the good thing is I would be able to melt the iron bars. Then I would be on the run and I would be the most wanted person in my life. If I could breathe underwater I could build a house underwater. Then I could tame a shark to be my pet. If i just breathed fire it wouldn't be fun. With water breathing I wouldn't be worried about drowning. So that is why I would rather be able to breathe underwater than breathe fire.
ReplyDeleteConnor #9
I would rather be able to breathe underwater than breathe fire. First, you can't control if you breathe, so you would have to breathe fire all the time. If you breathe water, you can only do that while you're underwater. Second, only a small part of the oceans have been explored. As the only water-breathing human, I wouldn't want to miss out on an opportunity like that! Third, I would get to stay in the pool for as long as I wanted to, no matter how much I would smell like chlorine! Awesome! That is why, I would rather be able to breathe underwater than breathe fire.
ReplyDelete~Lily Kilbridge
I would rather swim underwater that blow out fire. One reason is that you could swim with dolphins without having to go up and breath because you mite loose the dolphin. Another reason is that you could play hide in seek in a big pool and nobody will find you if you are underwater. You could also have fun because you could see all sorts of sea creatures. I would like it because it it cool and you could pretend to be a shark and not have to snorkel or breath with air. You could probably live underwater if you really wanted to and you could do everything underwater. That is why I would rather breath underwater than breath fire... :) COOPER WRZOSEK # 21
ReplyDeleteI would rather breath under water than have fire breath. First imagian you can explore so many things. You can go anywere in the ocean.Also you can go to the bottem and have a house there.This is why i want to breath under water.
ReplyDeleteI would rather be able to breath underwater because I can be like a mermaid. I can win in holding your breath underwater contest. I could swim underwater for hours. Beathing fire can be dangeruos for people around me. I love to swim so that wuold be perfect. I always wanted to be a mermaid. This will be cool and fun to do. I CAN LIVE UNDERWATER!!!! Julia Russomano #13
ReplyDeleteI would rather breath fire because its just really awesome. Nobody would mess with me if I needed privacy or doing homework. I would be cool to act like a dragon and breath fire everywhere. It would be so cool to see peoples reactions to me breathing fire at the playground. I could use my fire for good uses for camping like making a camp fire for warmth. Usually if you can breathe fire you can be immune to fire which would be awesome as well.
ReplyDeleteAlex #2
I would rather breathe under water. I would like to swim with the fish. I could find hidden treasure without coming for air. I would get a lot of money from people. I would get so much money from the swimming olympics.
ReplyDeleteSam McIntosh
I would rather be able to breathe under water. I would rather breathe under water because there is no use for breathing fire. I would also rather breathe under water because I could do lots of things with out drowning. I wouldn't want to breathe fire because there is no use for it. I wouldn't want to breathe fire because I could hit someone with the fire and they would catch on fire. Those are my reasons why I would like to breathe under water and wouldn't want to breathe fire.
ReplyDeleteNic Smith
I would rather breathe underwater than fire. I would do this because fire could hurt me or someone. Also fire could hurt my throut. I would want to breathe underwater because I could become Shark boy. I would like to be shark boy because I would swim with the sharks.This would be awesome.
ReplyDelete~DYLAN
I would rather breath under water than have fire breth.One reson is you can be talking and blow fire.Water braething is good so you can explore.You would be famase.Why would you need fire braeth for.This is why i would want to breath under water.AA1
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